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I’ll wait for love
I’ll wait for you
you’re all I want
I can’t give up on you

maybe I’m selfish
for wanting you so bad
but I don’t care
you make me shiver
you stole my heart
and ran away with it
now I can’t find it anymore
it is locked in your hands

it’s your choice
do you throw it away?
or keep it safe?
at least I gave you
my love
so there is no way back for me

every day is a punishment
if I have to live without you by my side

I’ll wait for love
I’ll wait for you
you’re all I want
I can’t give up on you
Just felt like writing this.
Dunno where it came from..
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Sevenway7 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That's exactly how I feel, I'm in love but he's never around, my heart breaks but I mended it and that's what I would say if I could tell him anything...
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Razias Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011
aw yush, I'm glad you understand this poem so well (:
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Sevenway7 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
he cane back =)
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Razias Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011
aw! I'm so happy for you! <3
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Sevenway7 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
came**
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SoradaHyperCookie Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
i love this..its exactly how im feeling right now... ;-;
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Razias Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009
ahw, I'm sorry honey. I hope it helps to read about it though (:
I felt the same way time ago..
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SoradaHyperCookie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Yes it does help C:
it pretty much sums up what im going thro right now, but im trying to be optimistic about it~
:D
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Razias Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2009
good :D I hope you'll be okai!
Good luck with all ^^
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hippyphreak Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009
WOW! this touches me an a very... very emotional level.
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Razias Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009
Ahw, thnx for your fave.
I hope it's not too emotional for you <3

xx
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ash214 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2009
I totally understand this, and I relate to it ALOT
I love this poem, it's everything I'v been thinking lately.
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Razias Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2009
naww, I'm sorry to hear hun :hug:
I wrote this from out of my heart, so it was a true poem.
I'm glad you like it, and I hope you'll be ok (:
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ash214 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2009
Well I think it's great :)
And thankyou, I hope your ok too xxx
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Razias Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2009
Thanks a bunch, really.
And yes, it's some time ago I wrote it.
It's going better, but it still counts (the poem)
Good luck hun <3
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xxfreakgirlxx Featured By Owner May 30, 2008
yush very good >< and sad *hug*
but i :heart: it, added on fav *sisi* good job ;)
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Razias Featured By Owner May 30, 2008
thanks honey, glad u like *hug*
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sushi-woot Featured By Owner May 30, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thats so preety and sad ^-^ TT.TT
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Razias Featured By Owner May 30, 2008
thanksies :heart:
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raevenilonka Featured By Owner May 29, 2008   Traditional Artist
cool rais:)
iemand in gedachten?
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TheMightyLemon Featured By Owner May 29, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know where this came from; it came from your very soul. :floating:
What a beautiful, heartfelt poem. Absolutely from the heart...your heart. :lemon::hug:
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Razias Featured By Owner May 30, 2008
hih thanks Mighty, maybe it's true ^_^
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MAnimeX Featured By Owner May 29, 2008
Kinda sad. Cheer up!=)
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Razias Featured By Owner May 29, 2008
bleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh >< sorry
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MAnimeX Featured By Owner May 29, 2008
You can ask for a sketch from me, see my journal for details^_^
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